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I know this place
Unwanted travel
I have been here many times
Or I have never left.
In the moonlight of friendship
I cannot recognize this plot
The beauty of the beams
Cast shadows
Against harsh rocks
And rough terrain
I am left here
When the sun's heavy light
Toilsome heat
Reveals my trepidation
Barren
Solitary
I stand alone
Where once again
I have to say
Goodbye
Unwanted travel
I have been here many times
Or I have never left.
In the moonlight of friendship
I cannot recognize this plot
The beauty of the beams
Cast shadows
Against harsh rocks
And rough terrain
I am left here
When the sun's heavy light
Toilsome heat
Reveals my trepidation
Barren
Solitary
I stand alone
Where once again
I have to say
Goodbye
When you have to say goodbye...
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These poems of yours make their experimental syntax and line breaks and other structural aspects feel natural. These are moving poems. It is maybe the hardest thing, tying our emotions into poems (why can't the word 'sad' provoke the thing it stands for); it is done effectively here.