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Alone

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Wind and rain discover my window,
Ashes of evening disfigure the stars

You are gone.

Monotone of indoors, a void,
defines my longing, distorts the room.

I will stand searching
beyond the gray, the rain,
beyond the wind, the emptiness,
with a longing, a hope.

Of finding you.
Update: :iconandyslade: Helped me quite a bit on this one. I thank him! He showed me some line combinations and some line/stanza breaks which really help the flow. Not much was changed in the wording. THANK YOU, Andy!
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